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  • Qadsawiya
    عـضـو فعال
    • Jun 2005
    • 76

    My wishes... by me

    hi i would like u to read my own poet and i want ur coments about it


    i wish i was not in the world list
    i wish i could feel the fear when it is far from here
    i wish to be in the jail were people are there
    i wish to open a new white page but i will never forget the black age

    people want to live in a never ending age
    but i dont have the chance to give them a break

    this ground made me believe that i have a point of living
    this ground made me believe iam a human been that allah made me


    i dont know what is happening for me
    i dont know who rubbed the smile from me
    but what i know that this is the girl who lived in a fright end night-mare
  • جوهرة نجد
    عـضـو فعال
    • Mar 2005
    • 158

    #2
    Qadsawiya

    your words are very sweet and the meaning is very beautiful

    i liked it very much

    But i would like to say to you that you should be optimistic and life is very short donot waste it on grief and sadness

    May Allah give you all the happinees

    My Regard

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    • Qadsawiya
      عـضـو فعال
      • Jun 2005
      • 76

      #3
      مشكوره خيتو على ال comments مالتج :p و مشكوره على مرورج لشعري

      تحياتي :. Qadsawiya

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