just one who is you

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    1. الأوركيديا البيضاء
      18-03-2010, 02:50 PM

      just one who is you

      just one who is you


      The life carries meanings and we try to understand it as own experiment...some thing happy and some thing sad ...but tou confront it with severity no tears and no smiles .
      I miss you even you are with me ...what avail from body without soul ?! you are always here with your body ...just the body .
      You fell that life takes every thing from you ; but you are wrong ...it leaved your pure heart who can begin again and again .Iyearn for the alive guy regardless his mysterious personality which hiding in his depths ...the person who deserve the hapiness although his weird contradictory choises and decisions .
      We are your friends , let your friends begin your new white pages and let me being the lines which you write your fellings on it .
      Stand up and keep pace with the life instead the fighting against it .
      Ispare you the confidence...my confidence...d'ont lose it ; and remember I'll be with you until the heal up , when nothing can hinder your way





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    2. دمعة فراق
      18-03-2010, 08:15 PM

      just one who is you


      very nice think you a lot
    3. ** عبورة عتيبه **
      19-03-2010, 05:15 PM

      just one who is you


      Good words sis ,, keep it up
    4. الأوركيديا البيضاء
      19-03-2010, 08:25 PM

      just one who is you


      thank you so much for the pass
    5. ღرفيف الروحღ
      19-03-2010, 09:36 PM

      just one who is you


      wOOOw this is great

      thanx sweetie..keep it up

      PEACE
    6. الأوركيديا البيضاء
      19-03-2010, 10:53 PM

      just one who is you


      thank you baby you are the best
    7. تهويذة المطر
      27-03-2010, 09:21 PM

      just one who is you


      dear ...your words are so great
    8. new moon
      28-03-2010, 01:35 PM

      just one who is you


      I love it .. so nice

      keep it up sis

      PEACE
    9. Off The Grid
      22-09-2013, 11:53 PM

      رد: just one who is you

      just one who is you





      Nice try . Though to be honest , it's stuffed with many mistakes . I tried to re-write the 1st part only ( due to shortage of time ) . I'm sure that even if I've got the time , I wouldn't be able to come up with a better composition . The ideas themselves never seem to twain ; There is no meaningful connection between them . I don't mean to offend you , because believe me I wouldn't waste my time telling you this , if I didn't think already that you could do it better

      :
      This is what I could do with the 1st part

      Life carries many meanings , but we're trying to understand them
      as a result of our own experiments
      ( Even with this corrected form
      I couldn't get it ! )

      Somethings are happy ; other things are sad . But we have to be
      brave enough to stand up for ourselves , without pouring down
      .
      our tears nor making up our smiles
      Even when we're together , I still miss you . How can a body live
      without its soul
      ?